A Nawty Mouz: Review: The Wolf Summers By ElSol

One of my favorite long erotic stories is "The Wolf Summers" by ElSol, which can be found at the Alt Sex Stories Text Repository under the Alt.Sex.Stories.Moderated archives. (When you are itching for free erotic text of every kind whether kinked or unkinked, this is the place to find it. Without a doubt, ASSTR and ASSM is the grand-daddy of erotic archives on the net.) The links to the story "The Wolf Summers" are listed at the end of this post for your enjoyment.

This is an unrealistic fictional story which follows the development of a dominant man from boyhood to adulthood. The author uses several arcs to tell the story. You can read the story in a linear time fashion or you can read it in the order presented, which I find more suspenseful.

I have read this story at least three times (perhaps four). What I like about this story is the dominance and power that David (the main character) develops. He has a powerful presence throughout the story. In fact, the Wolf does not refer to any furry or zoo fantasy, it refers to a wolflike nature or totem. It is more subtle than a werewolf experience (there is no morphing or shape-shifting), but it is reminiscent of 'Cat People' [oh, especially the version with Nastassja Kinski & Malcolm McDowell].

David's influence and power grows from sexual dominance to political and financial power. His sexual dominance does not stem from physical dominance over women rather it is from his sexual skills. His wolf nature demands submission and he forces that submission with finesse. His physical dominance over women is not very prominent. There are a couple of women in the story who gain his rebuke. Their punishment is that they are given as toys to his closest women to be trained to serve him. A heirarchy and inner circle develops around him designed to protect and satisfy him.

Here is a couple of excerpts from the first chapter:

"please... David... please... please... please..."

I let her say it for 15 seconds keeping my tongue moving. I pulled up and said, "Please what Jeanie?"

I went back to work on her clit.

"Please... David... PLEASE!"

I kept the light touch of my tongue on longer this time. I felt weight on the bed.

"Please what, Jeanie?"

She could not say anything but 'please'.

I did not care.

She had to cave for my summer plans to bear fruit. I went back to work and with sheer willpower got my tongue to flick across her clit faster. She fought to loose my hold. I could not let her do that; she would attack herself to finish. I held on to her hands and pulled her to me backing up enough to not give her more contact with my tongue. I kept at it, up/down up/down, up/down as fast as I could.

"okay... okay... kay... okay... kay."

I stayed where I was and let say her new prayer for a full minute before I pulled up.

"Okay, what Jeanie?" She would not answer so I went back this time starting slow and moving up in speed only to slow back down. I tried to make the touch on her clit even lighter.

"OH MY GOD!! Okay... okay... I'll do it... I'll do anything." I felt Cara sit on the bed as her daughter's will gave before mine.

and ...

"Jeanie..."

"Nnngh" she tried to turn around, tried to get me to move inside her. I ground into her for a couple of seconds; her breath caught. There was definitely a spot that I could hit in this position that her body loved.

"Carmen and Tanya..." I pulled out slowly and stroked back in just as slowly. I wanted her ready.

"I'll make a gift of them to you."

She gasped.

Cara gasped too.

I had seen Jeanie look at women. She was young and the reputation she had at school needed nothing added to it but the wanting was there. It was the fifth ace; Carmen and Tanya, hers to play with.

and ...

I could excuse my next action by saying it was taught instinct. My uncles, Iris, my step-aunts, my mother, all of them had been a party to that instinct but like Jeanie I had been a willing accomplice to the lessons.

I pulled slowly out of Jeanie allowing our audience to see the way her body wanted to keep me in her.

I stood up.

I turned to look at Cara. She was close to precipice; it was in the hunger of her eyes. I sent a silent prayer to the patron saint of 'the hunger in a woman's eyes'.

She moved her eyes from my hard cock to meet mine. She hungered for what I had given her daughter but the taboo fear was there also. I was a teenage boy no matter how experienced I had just proven myself to be. We were in her daughter's room.

Her hands scratched lines on her thighs. She hungered but challenged me to make her cross the line. She could not do it alone, no matter the need.

I had just fucked her daughter past submission to that happy place that left her lying enjoying the aftereffects and watching the interaction between her mother and I with nothing more than quiet curiosity. Cara knew how it would end if she left it to me, and that is why she did. Every fantasy, every desired perversion would be exposed to the light, studied, and experienced jointly.

I took the three steps that put my legs between hers. She leaned back on the bed looking up at me. She would not look at my dick; she would take the initiative if she did, and she wanted no part of controlling this. I reached down and pulled one side of her short gray skirt up to where it almost exposed her. I straightened and looked at her for a moment. I reached down and pulled the other side of her skirt up. The juncture at her legs was exposed.

Slim, pink panties.

I looked up at her smiled.

I straightened up and stared at her. Her eyes grew wider as I waited. She knew what I wanted; an admission that this was all she desired at this moment.

I stood there while she half-lay on the bed for a long moment until she broke the tension by lifting her ass, and spreading her legs further. It raised the skirt to give me better access between her legs. I smiled in thanks for the admission.

I reached down between her legs and played with her through her panties. She rolled her head back and moved herself on me.

She was mine.

All of David's women enjoy having sex with each other. In fact, a rule develops that becomes a code of fidelity for David's extramarital sex. The woman must have sex with his wife, sometimes before or very soon after he does. Oh, and his three concubines expect the same tribute after his wife, sometimes at the same time. There is no male-male sex is this story. It is not a part of David's interest.

One of the other things I found intruiging about this story are some of the bits of 'wisdom' that David shares from his uncles. I have wanted to collect these together. I may do that in a follow on post. Bits like -

One of my uncles told me "as long as a woman gives you time and attention,
patience will get her pants off".

There is plenty of sex and plenty of plot in this story and both complement each other well. I find it erotic and even emotionally affecting. If you read it, share what you thought about it.

The Wolf Summers By ElSol

Author's Note: This story uses incest as core plot tool. It is unrealistic fantasy and not 'reality erotica'. The final listing of applicable categories are (MF mf Mf mF 1st teen coll cons reluc coer inc mother son cous fath dau aunt neph het Mdom BD group oral anal solo). [Story codes]

Chapter 1: Carmen and Tanya;
"Starting in the middle of a large story,
after the end of a young story,
before the beginning of a male story."
Chapter 2: The Itch; The beginning of a large story.
Chapter 3: Iris's Price; The beginning of a young story.
Chapter 4: The Ants; The middle of a young story
Chapter 5: Oedipus calling; The end of a young story
Chapter 6: Carmen and Tanya; The middle of a large story
Chapter 7: Summer Crushes; The beginning of a male story
Chapter titled 'The Winter Interlude'; Not quite a break in the story
Chapter 8: First Year Adjustments; The middle of a male story...
Chapter 9: Loving Erica; The end of a male story
Chapter 10a: In the Cradle of the Pack; The end of a large story
Chapter 10b: In the Cradle of the Pack; The end of a large story
Chapter 10c: In The Cradle of the Pack; The end of a large story